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Revised: This Reviewed Preprint has been revised by the authors in response to the previous round of peer review; the eLife assessment and the public reviews have been updated where necessary by the editors and peer reviewers.
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- Reviewing EditorYuxin ChenXiamen University, Xiamen, China
- Senior EditorMeredith SchumanUniversity of Zurich, Zürich, Switzerland
Reviewer #1 (Public review):
Summary:
This work used a comprehensive dataset to compare the effects of species diversity and genetic diversity within each trophic level and across three trophic levels. The results stated that species diversity had negative effects on ecosystem functions, while genetic diversity had positive effects. Additionally, these effects were observed only within each trophic level and not across the three trophic levels studied. Although the effects of biodiversity, especially genetic diversity across multi-trophic levels, have been shown to be important, there are still very few empirical studies on this topic due to the complex relationships and difficulty in obtaining data. This study collected an excellent dataset to address this question, enhancing our understanding of genetic diversity effects in aquatic ecosystems.
Strengths:
The study collected an extensive dataset that includes species diversity of primary producers (riparian trees), primary consumers (macroinvertebrate shredders), and secondary consumers (fish). It also includes genetic diversity of the dominant species in each trophic level, biomass production, decomposition rates, and environmental data. The writing is logical and easy to follow.
Weaknesses:
The two main conclusions-(1) species diversity had negative effects on ecosystem functions, while genetic diversity had positive effects, and (2) these effects were observed only within each trophic level, not across the three levels-are overly generalized. Analysis of the raw data shows that species and genetic diversity have different effects depending on the ecosystem function. For example, neither affected invertebrate biomass, but species diversity positively influenced fish biomass, while genetic diversity had no effect. Furthermore, Table S2 reveals that only four effect sizes were significant (P < 0.05): one positive genetic effect, one negative genetic effect, and two negative species effects, with two effects within a trophic level and two across trophic levels. Additionally, using a P < 0.2 threshold to omit lines in the SEMs is uncommon and was not adequately justified. A more cautious interpretation of the results, with acknowledgment of the variability observed in the raw data, would strengthen the manuscript.
Author response:
The following is the authors’ response to the original reviews.
Public Reviews:
Reviewer #1 (Public review):
Summary:
This work used a comprehensive dataset to compare the effects of species diversity and genetic diversity within each trophic level and across three trophic levels. The results showed that species diversity had negative effects on ecosystem functions, while genetic diversity had positive effects. These effects were observed only within each trophic level and not across the three trophic levels studied. Although the effects of biodiversity, especially genetic diversity across multi-trophic levels, have been shown to be important, there are still very few empirical studies on this topic due to the complex relationships and difficulty in obtaining data. This study collected an excellent dataset to address this question, enhancing our understanding of genetic diversity effects in aquatic ecosystems.
Strengths:
The study collected an extensive dataset that includes species diversity of primary producers (riparian trees), primary consumers (macroinvertebrate shredders), and secondary consumers (fish). It also includes the genetic diversity of the dominant species at each trophic level, biomass production, decomposition rates, and environmental data.
The conclusions of this paper are mostly well supported by the data and the writing is logical and easy to follow.
Weaknesses:
(1) While the dataset is impressive, the authors conducted analyses more akin to a "meta-analysis," leaving out important basic information about the raw data in the manuscript. Given the complexity of the relationships between different trophic levels and ecosystem functions, it would be beneficial for the authors to show the results of each SEM (structural equation model).
We understand the point raised by the reviewer. We now provide individual SEMs (Figure 3), although we limit causal relationships to those for which the p-value was below 0.2 for the sake of graphical clarity. We also provide the percentage of explained variance for each ecosystem function. We detail the graph in the Results section (see l. 317-328) and discuss them (see l. 387-398). Note that we do not detail each function separately as this would (in our opinion) result in a long descriptive paragraph from which it might be difficult to get some key information. Rather, we summarize the percentage of explained variance for each function and discuss the strength of environmental vs biodiversity effects for some examples. In the Discussion, we explain why environmental effects (on functions and biodiversity) are relatively weak. We mainly attribute this to the sampling scheme that follows an East-West gradient (weak altitudinal range) rather than an upstream-downstream gradient as it is traditionally done in rivers. The reasoning behind this sampling scheme is explained in our companion paper (Fargeot et al. Oikos 2023) to which we now refer more explicitly in the MS. Briefly, using an upstream-downstream gradient would have certainly push up the effects of the environment, but this would have made extremely complex the inference of biodiversity effects due to strong collinearity among environmental and biodiversity parameters.
(2) The main results presented in the manuscript are derived from a "metadata" analysis of effect sizes. However, the methods used to obtain these effect sizes are not sufficiently clarified. By analyzing the effect sizes of species diversity and genetic diversity on these ecosystem functions, the results showed that species diversity had negative effects, while genetic diversity had positive effects on ecosystem functions. The negative effects of species diversity contradict many studies conducted in biodiversity experiments. The authors argue that their study is more relevant because it is based on a natural system, which is closer to reality, but they also acknowledge that natural systems make it harder to detect underlying mechanisms. Providing more results based on the raw data and offering more explanations of the possible mechanisms in the introduction and discussion might help readers understand why and in what context species diversity could have negative effects.
(We now provide more details. However, we are unfortunately not sure that this helped reaching some stronger explanation regarding underlying mechanisms. To be frank, we did not succeed in improving mechanistic inferences based on the outputs of the SEM models. We explored visually some additional relationships (e.g. relationships between the biomass of the focal species and that of other species in the assemblage) that we now discuss a bit more, but again, this did not really help in better understanding processes. We realize this is a limitation of our study and that this can be frustrating for readers. Nonetheless, as said in the Discussion, field-based study must be taken for what they are; observational studies forming the basis for future mechanistic studies. Although we failed to explain mechanisms, we still think that we provide important field-base evidence for the importance of biodiversity (as a whole) for ecosystem functions.
- Environmental variation was included in the analyses to test if the environment would modulate the effects of biodiversity on ecosystem functions. However, the main results and conclusions did not sufficiently address this aspect.
This is now addressed, see our response to your first comment. We now explain (result section) and discuss environmental effects. As explained in the MS, environmental effects are similar in strength to those of biodiversity and are not that high, which is partly explained by the sampling scheme (see Fargeot et al. 2023). This is a choice we’ve made at the onset of the experiment, as we wanted to focus on biodiversity effects and avoid strong collinearity as it is generally the case in rivers (which impedes any proper and strong statistical inferences).
Reviewer #2 (Public review):
Summary:
Fargeot et al. investigated the relative importance of genetic and species diversity on ecosystem function and examined whether this relationship varies within or between trophic-level responses. To do so, they conducted a well-designed field survey measuring species diversity at 3 trophic levels (primary producers [trees], primary consumers [macroinvertebrate shredders], and secondary consumers [fishes]), genetic diversity in a dominant species within each of these 3 trophic levels and 7 ecosystem functions across 52 riverine sites in southern France. They show that the effect of genetic and species diversity on ecosystem functions are similar in magnitude, but when examining within-trophic level responses, operate in different directions: genetic diversity having a positive effect and species diversity a negative one. This data adds to growing evidence from manipulated experiments that both species and genetic diversity can impact ecosystem function and builds upon this by showing these effects can be observed in nature.
Strengths:
The study design has resulted in a robust dataset to ask questions about the relative importance of genetic and species diversity of ecosystem function across and within trophic levels.
Overall, their data supports their conclusions - at least within the system that they are studying - but as mentioned below, it is unclear from this study how general these conclusions would be.
Weaknesses:
(4) While a robust dataset, the authors only show the data output from the SEM (i.e., effect size for each individual diversity type per trophic level (6) on each ecosystem function (7)), instead of showing much of the individual data. Although the summary SEM results are interesting and informative, I find that a weakness of this approach is that it is unclear how environmental factors (which were included but not discussed in the results) nor levels of diversity were correlated across sites. As species and genetic diversity are often correlated but also can have reciprocal feedbacks on each other (e.g., Vellend 2005), there may be constraints that underpin why the authors observed positive effects of one type of diversity (genetic) when negative effects of the other (species). It may have also been informative to run SEM with links between levels of diversity. By focusing only on the summary of SEM data, the authors may be reducing the strength of their field dataset and ability to draw inferences from multiple questions and understand specific study-system responses.
We have addressed this remark and we ask the reviewers and the readers to refer to our response to comment 1 from reviewer 1. Regarding co-variation among biodiversity estimates (SGDCs according to Vellend’s framework), we have addressed these issues in a companion paper that we now cite and expand further in the MS (Fargeot et al. Oikos, 2023). Given the size of the dataset and its complexity (and associated analyses), we have decided to focus on patterns of species and genetic biodiversity in a first paper (Oikos paper) and then on the link between biodiversity and functions (this paper). As it can be read in the Oikos’s paper, there are no co-variation in term of biodiversity estimates; species diversity is not correlated to genetic diversity, and within facet, there are not co-variation among species. In addition, environmental predictors are highly estimate-specific (i.e. environmental predictors sustaining species and genetic estimates are idiosyncratic). As a result (see the new Figure 3), environmental effects are relatively weak (the same intensity that those of biodiversity) and collinearity among parameters is relatively weak. The second point is important, as this permit to better infer parameters from models, and this allows to discuss direct relationships (as observed in Figure 3, indirect environmental effects are relatively rare). We provide in the Discussion a bit more explanation about the absence of co-variation among biodiversity estimates (see l. 433-440).
(5) My understanding of SEM is it gives outputs of the strength/significance of each pathway/relationship and if so, it isn't clear why this wasn't used and instead, confidence intervals of Z scores to determine which individual BEFs were significant. In addition, an inclusion of the 7 SEM pathway outputs would have been useful to include in an appendix.
We now provide p-values (Table S2) and the seven models (Figure 3).
(6) I don't fully agree with the authors calling this a meta-analysis as it is this a single study of multiple sites within a single region and a specific time point, and not a collection of multiple studies or ecosystems conducted by multiple authors. Moreso, the authors are using meta-analysis summary metrics to evaluate their data. The authors tend to focus on these patterns as general trends, but as the data is all from this riverine system this study could have benefited from focusing on what was going on in this system to underpin these patterns. I'd argue more data is needed to know whether across sites and ecosystems, species diversity and genetic diversity have opposite effects on ecosystem function within trophic levels.
We agree. “Meta-regression” would perhaps be more adequate than “meta-analyses”. We changed the formulation.
Reviewer #3 (Public review):
The manuscript by Fargeot and colleagues assesses the relative effects of species and genetic diversity on ecosystem functioning. This study is very well written and examines the interesting question of whether within-species or among-species diversity correlates with ecosystem functioning, and whether these effects are consistent across trophic levels. The main findings are that genetic diversity appears to have a stronger positive effect on function than species diversity (which appears negative). These results are interesting and have value.
However, I do have some concerns that could influence the interpretation.
(7) Scale: the different measures of diversity and function for the different trophic levels are measured over very different spatial scales, for example, trees along 200 m transects and 15 cm traps. It is not clear whether trees 200 m away are having an effect on small-scale function.
Trees identification and invertebrate (and fish) sampling are done on the same scale. Trees are spread along the river so that their leaves fall directly in the river. Traps have been installed all along the same transect in various micro-habitats. Diversity have been measured at the exact same scale for all organisms. We have modified the MS to make this clear.
(8) Size of diversity gradients: More information is needed on the actual diversity gradients. One of the issues with surveys of natural systems is that they are of species that have already gone through selection filters from a regional pool, and theoretically, if the environments are similar, you should get similar sets of species, without monocultures. So, if the species diversity gradients range from say, 6 to 8 species, but genetic diversity gradients span an order of magnitude more, you can explain much more variance with genetic diversity. Related to this, species diversity effects on function are often asymptotic at high diversity and so if you are only sampling at the high diversity range, we should expect a strong effect.
Fish species number varies from 1 to 11, invertebrate family number varies from 15 to 42 and the tree species number varies from 7 to 20 (see Fargeot et al. 2023 for details). We have added this information in the M&M. The gradients are hence relatively large and do not cover a restricted set of values. There is a variance in species number among sites, even if sites are collected along a relatively weak altitudinal gradient. This is obviously complex to compare to SNP (genomic) diversity. Genetic and species effects are similar in effect sizes (percentage of explained variance), so it does not seem we have biased one of the two gradients of biodiversity.
(9) Ecosystem functions: The functions are largely biomass estimates (expect decomposition), and I fail to see how the biomass of a single species can be construed as an ecosystem function. Aren't you just estimating a selection effect in this case?
The biomass estimated for a certain area represents an estimate of productivity, whatever the number of species being considered. Obviously, productivity of a species can be due to environmental constraints; the biomass is expected to be lower at the niche margin (selection effect). But if these environmental effects are taken into account (which is the case in the SEMs), then the residual variation can be explained by biodiversity effects. We provide an explanation (l. 217-219).
(10) Note that the article claims to be one of the only studies to look at function across trophic levels, but there are several others out there, for example:
Thanks, we now cite some of these studies (Li et al 2020, Moi et al. 2021, Seibold et al. 2018).
Recommendations for the authors:
Reviewer #1 (Recommendations for the authors):
Introduction:
The introduction of the manuscript is generally well-structured, and the scientific questions are clearly presented. However, in each paragraph where specific aspects are introduced, the authors do not focus sufficiently on the given points. The current introduction discusses the weaknesses of previous studies extensively but lacks detailed explanations of mechanisms and a clear anticipation of this study's contributions.
For example:
L72-77: The authors mention that "genetic diversity may functionally compensate for a species loss," but this point is not highly relevant to the main analyses of this study, which focus on comparing the relative effects of species diversity and genetic diversity.
Yes true, we understand the point made by the reviewers. We deleted this part of the sentence.
L87-95: As previously noted, "whether environmental variation decreases or enhances the relative influence of genetic and species diversity on ecosystem functions" was not addressed in this study. Additionally, the last sentence seems unnecessary here, as it does not relate to "environmental variation." The phrase "generate insightful knowledge for future mechanistic models" is vague. It would be helpful to specify what kind of knowledge and what types of future mechanistic models are being referred to.
We modified these two sentences. We now posit the prediction that what has been observed under controlled conditions (that genetic and species have effects of similar magnitude) might not be the norm under fluctuating environments (because it has been shown that environmental variation modulates the strength of interspecific BEFS and create huge variance).
L96-116: The use of "for instance" three times in this paragraph makes the structure seem scattered, as only examples are provided. Improving the transition words can help the text focus better on the main point.
We have modified some parts of this section to better reflect predictions
L115-116: Again, it would be beneficial to specify what kind of insightful information can be provided.
We have modified this sentence by making more explicit some of the information that may be gained.
L117-134: Stating clear expectations can help the introduction focus on the mechanisms and assist readers in following the results.
We now provide some predictions. We were reluctant to make predictions in the first version of the MS as we have the feeling that predictions can go on very different direction depending on how we set the scene. We therefore stick to predictions that we think are the most logical (the simplest ones). This illustrates the lack of theoretical papers on these issues.
Methods:
L287-293: The method for estimating the standard effect size is unclear. I assume it was derived from the SEM models? This needs further clarification.
Yes, it is derived from the standardized estimate from each pSEM. This is now explained in the MS.
Results:
As mentioned in the public review, it is very important to show the results of analyzing raw data.
Done, see Figure 3 and Results section.
Table 1: The font and format of the PCA table are different from other tables and appear vague, resembling a picture rather than a table.
Changed.
Table 2 (and supplementary table): "D.f." is not explained in the table legend. Is 1 the numerator df and 30 the denominator df? Is the denominator the residual? Additionally, the table legend mentions "magnitude and direction." ANOVA only tests if the biodiversity effects are significantly different between species or genetic diversity, but not the magnitude. For example, -0.5 and 0.5 are very different, but their effect magnitudes are the same.
This is a mistake; sorry the format of the Table was from a previous version of the MS in which we used linear models rather that linear mixed models (both lead to the same results). The ANOVA used to test the significance of fixed terms in linear mixed model are based on Wald chi-sqare tests, and it should have been read “Chi-value” rather than “F-value” in both tables and the only degree of freedom in this test is the one at the numerator. This has been changed. We have changed the caption of the Table (“ANOVA table for the linear mixed model testing whether the relationships between biodiversity and ecosystem functions measured in a riverine trophic chain differ between the biodiversity facets (species or genetic diversity) and the types of BEF (within- or between-trophic levels)”)
Minor:
There should always be a space between a number and a unit. In the manuscript, spaces are inconsistently used between numbers and units.
Corrected
Reviewer #2 (Recommendations for the authors):
(1) In the introduction, the authors could focus more and build out what they predicted/hypothesized as well as what has been found in the manipulated experiments that examined the role of species and genetic diversity. That would enhance the background information for a more general audience, and highlight expected results and why.
We modified the Introduction according to comments made by reviewer 1 and clarified the predictions as best as we can.
(2) Similarly, the discussion is fairly big picture, but this dataset focused exclusively on this 3-trophic interaction in a riverine system. It could be beneficial to dig into the ecology to find out why the opposite effects of species and genetic diversity are seen within trophic levels in this system.
We have added some explanations based on the specific pSEM (see our responses to the public reviews for details). But as said in the responses to the public reviews, even with mode detailed models, it is hard to tease apart mechanisms. One important point is that genetic and species diversity do not correlate one to each other (they do not co-vary over space), which means the effect of one facet is independent from the other. However, apart from that, we can’t really tell more without more mechanistic approaches. We understand this is frustrating, but this is the nature of field-based data. This does not mean they are useless. On the contrary, they confirm and expand patterns found under controlled conditions (which for ecologists is quite important as nature is our playground), but they are limited in inferences of mechanisms.
(3) It would also be informative if the authors specified what positive and negative Z scores mean. It seems counterintuitive in Figure 3. For example, in the upper left, it's denoted as a larger intraspecific effect - which I'd assume is higher genetic (within species) diversity - but is this not where species diversity effects are higher? In theory this figure could be similar to Figure 1 from Des Roches et al. 2018 - where showing the 1:1 line of where species and genetic diversity effects are similar and then how some are more impacted by SD or GD as that links to the overall question, right?
For example: Figure 3 makes it seem that GD effects are stronger (more positive) for within trophic responses (which is reflected in the text), but in that quadrant, it states that the interspecific effect is larger?
yes, you’re true Figure 3 (now Figure 4) is not ideal. We added an explicit explanation for interpreting Zr in the main text. In addition, we modified the text in the quadrat as this was not correct. Note that it cannot be directly be compared to that of DesRoches et al. In DesRoches et al., there is a single effect size (ES) per situation (which is roughly expressed as “ES = effect of species - effect of genotypes”). Here, there are two ES per situation, one for the species effect, the other for the genetic effect, which makes the biplot more complex (as species and genetic can be similar in magnitude, but opposite in direction, e.g., 0.5 and -0.5). We may have done as DesRoches et al. (“ES = effect of species - effect of genotypes”), but as we don’t have absolute ES (as in DesRoches) the resulting signs of the ES are non sensical…Not easy for us to find a clever solution (or said differently, we were not clever enough to find an easy solution). Nonetheless, we tried another visualization by including “sub-quadrats” into the four main quadrats. We hope this will be clearer
(4) It's unclear why authors included both a simplified linear mixed model with diversity type and biodiversity facet as fixed factors, and then a second linear model that included trophic level (with those other 2 factors and interactions), but only showed results of trophic level from that more complex model. It is unclear why they include two models when the more complex one would have evaluated all aspects of their research question and shown the same patterns.
You’re true, the more complex model evaluates both aspects. Nonetheless, as the hypotheses were strictly separated, we thought it is simpler to associate one model to one hypothesis. We agree that this duplicates information, but we would like to keep the two models to make the text more gradual.